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Novelist. Author of APSARAS and tales from the beautiful Saigh Valley. First person to quantify spiritual values.

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Friday, 8 May 2009

Critique of 'APSARAS' by Cynthia Sherman

APSARAS
Critique Section – This information will be provided by the Critic:
Cynthia Sherman







I believe you can turn this into a marketable story. It has all of the necessary elements: good characterization; interesting (and well-described) settings; and authentic-sounding dialogue.

This is a good piece of work. The characters are strong and I like the plot. I especially enjoyed the scene where the character was being carried away by the water. This was extremely visual. Throughout the manuscript, you have demonstrated other scenes with just as much visual implications. The readers will be able to see themselves within the scenes with these characters. I am impressed so far. I can not wait to read more of your work. I sincerely wish you luck with this endeavor.

Cynthia Sherman
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